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Title: The promotion level of women's rights in different countries
Thesis statement: Even though the innovation of women's rights has begin since 19th century, and the women's rights has been realized diffusely in most countries, but the promotion level of women's rights in different countries is still difficult to be the same because of the different history background, traditional opinions, economic situation, and local power such as government. There still exists many hampers to realize the real equal of women's roghts.
1.The situation of women before the innovation of women's roghts.
a."a woman whose mind, speech and body are kept in subjection, acquires high renown in this world, and , in the next, the same abode with her husband."(Hindu scriptures)
b.Be bound by marrisge
c.Women cannot get better education
d. Law and morality tend to protect men's rights
2.The innovation of women's right.
a.18 century"All cotizens including women are equally admissible to all public dignities, offices and employments, according to their capaity, and with no other distincyion than taht of their virtues and talents." (Declaration of the Rights of Woman and female)
b.19 century"we are continually told that civilization and Christinaity have restored to the woman he just rights. Meanwhile the wife is the actual bondservant of her husband; no less so, as far as the leagal obligation goes, than slaves commonly so called"(The Subjection of Women)
3.The shortage of women's rights in some countries and the reason.
a. shortage
①In some Asian countries, such as South Korea, most men and men's parents hope the women can stay at home to take care of the family.
②In China, many people still want a boy. This is a traditional opinion.
③In some economically backwrad regions, people will let boys go to school to get education but girls. The women can not get better education, and then they cannot get a better job.
④Abortion. Rape and sexual violence. Some place o not have stronge law to protect women.
b.reason of shortage
①History background
②Traditional Opinion
③Economy situation
④political, government
⑤People's understanding of what is real women's right. What do women real need.
4.Summary: The shortage of women's right is still a problem. And it will still be there for a long time.
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From your title, we assume that you are going to represent the different levels of women's rights in different countries. From your title, we assume your paper is going to deal with the situation of different levels of women's rights in different countries by focusing on each country. Then in the body part, we find that you have given a lot of general information of women's rights, and then briefly give a few countries cases as examples. Then your analysis to this situation and the reasons are general, instead of analyzing the reasons in each country.
Whether you have made your title and thesis too narrowed, or whether you have gone too general in body part? You have to think and decide what you are going to focus on.
Fix it with more consistent thesis and Body.
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