Outline
Change of women’s social statusThesis statement
- Women’s social status is getting grown up in society, and its importance is required from society.
1. Historical information about women’s social status.
- 19th century of women’s social status
2. Background information about women’s social status.
(1) Industrial Revolution’s influence of women’s status (Starting point)
(2) Development of social structure made women’s status grew up
(3) Women’s movement to get jobs happened because of social limitation to keep their household only from men income.
(4) Social facts that women proceed to social parts which are only thought for men’s work
3. Women’s various movement which can prove their social status is getting grown up.
(1) Political part
(2) Social part
(3) Educational part
4. Invisible facts that make women can’t get more high status
- There is still discrimination toward to women that seems like inequality between women and men
(1) Income part
(2) Job’s position part
(3) Limitation of political status part
5. Social facts that women’s status of development is important.
- Reduce inequality between men and women in society
(1) It can get rid of fixed images of women that were discrimination.
(2) Statistical information how women influenced on our society.
6. Conclusion
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1 comment:
The outline is well organized, but with a few weak points:
1. In Part three, "political part", "social part", "educational part, what "part" means is not clear. Please give more specific expressions.
2. Part 4 is supposed to be the invisible problems still existing in women's social status. It should be elaborated in details, esp. its harms, so that they will lay a solid foundation for the next part, about why it is critical to remove these problems and improve women's status practically.
Leslie
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