Mar 21, 2010

OUT LINE (CHAO ZHOU)

Out line
Topic: Women rights is still be ignored.
Now days women rights is a hot topic, in the suface, it’s seems that women rights is keeping developing, but in fact the women rights is still be ignored.
1, Now days two important international women’s rights documents: Two important international women’s rights documents are now used as tools by women’s rights groups around the world.
2. Women's rights continues to be problematic: now days is still has gender discrimination
(1) glass ceiling: Glass ceiling is an idiom referring to the barrier women face in the office, which prevents them from going to the top. The ceiling of a building is the top cover of the house, hence alluding to the top positions in the office. Glass is metaphorical. Glass is transparent and sometimes invisible, but it is there, alluding to the subtle nature of the glass ceiling facing women in government – although some people may not see it, it is there.
(2) Biggest Woman Issues - Abortion, Sexual Harassment and Prostitution
a.Sexal Harassment: Vague sexual harassment claims cause disasters like no tomorrow, the sexual harassment can happen in differents kinds of situation.
b.prositution: Prostitution without control is like letting an army of diseased dogs running loose on the street.
c. Abortion: Too much easy abortion turns people into irresponsible bastard, in fact, abortion in hamful for woman’s health, it’s not only impinge the women rights,but also break the human rights
3.. Gender discrimination is harmful for women’s mentality

1 comment:

Leslie said...

Your outline is generally fine but lack of a lot of details. For example, the two documents should be given clearly. And about the glass ceiling or sexual harassment, etc. You should give the specific cases, examples or data you are going to use to elaborate your points, not the definition or somebody's metophoric description, which may appear in paper, but not in outline.

Read your materials and decide what kinds of details or evidences you are going to use in each part.