Mar 14, 2010



Outline
Title: American Dream
Purpose: To inform
Audience: Professor and Students
Point of view: My opinion
Thesis: People are coming to America with
American dreams.
Introduction: State reasons for coming to America and explain about why America is land
of opportunity.

1 comment:

Leslie said...

Whose is this?

First of all, the outline is too brief to give any comments on.

And the picture itself is not a good pick, too.

You should be able to find better pictures. The topic is hard to bring anything new. The thesis statement is a plain fact. You have to think it over more deeply.

Leslie