Outline:
I. Introduction:
American people love going Disneyland, no matter what age they are. Disneyland is a place of dreams, creativity, and exertion. They love dreaming, each one of them has a lasting dream. They are innovative, usually surprise people with their unbelievable creativity. Moreover, they are studious, working very hard at workplaces.
II. Body：
1. Dream big dreams
a. Disneyland is a place of dreams.
b. Every American has a dream, no matter what age he is.
2. Innovative
a. Disneyland is a place of creativity.
b. American people are innovative. They break old paths and not be fettered by accepted theories.
3. Studious
a. Disneyland is a place of exertion.
b. American people work hard for the family, firm and society.
III. Conclusion：
Disneyland presents American people’s spirit: dream big dreams, innovative, and studious. Disneyland is not only be built by concrete and stones, it is also built by dreams, innovation and exertion.
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1 comment:
From the contents and pictures you have picked, I can find that this topic won't be very challenging and bring new ideas. It might become a general introduction.
Those pictures are just common ones we can find everywhere, and the ways you listed as Americans way to release their stress are actually same to everyone in every country.
My suggestion is, whether it's better to show why American people are living with so much stress, and why they lead a "word hard, play hard" life. That is, when Americans work, they work extremely hard, by working 2 or 3 jobs; and when they play, they play crazily as if there is no tomorrow coming.
It reminds me the movie, "Live Free or Die Hard". I just mean the title, not the contents of the movie.
Think about it and if you agree, fix it.
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