Mar 14, 2010

women's right (jaeman. myung)

I will divide 4 parts my 3rd essay to explain women’s right. In the first paragraph, I will discuss relationship between women and education. First paragraph is consisted also 4 parts. First is education’s function and effect. Second is present condition of sex discrimination educational structure in Korea. Third is sex discrimination educational participation present condition in Korea. Fourth is the subject for the position improvement of the women in the education field.
Second paragraph, I will discuss relationship between women and economic. First small paragraph is economic activity of women in history. Second is sex unequal theory of economic field. Third is economic phase and the actual condition of Korean women. Fourth is the subject for the position improvement of the women in the education field.
Third paragraph, I will discuss relationship between women and politic. First small paragraph is era of political sex discrimination. Second is Political ceremony and the quality of Korean women. Third is the characteristic thing which appears in political site of Korea. Fourth is the subject for the position improvement of the women in the politic field.
Forth big paragraph, I will discuss relationship between women and law. First small paragraph is the women and the law through meaning of law. Second small paragraph is Feminine relevant law present condition of Korea. Third is the characteristic discrimination which appears in Korean feminine relevant law. Fourth is the subject for the position improvement of the women in the law field.

1 comment:

Leslie said...

Why not just post your outline with the lists, instead of using words.

It didn't give your thesis statement clearly. According to my understanding, you are going to talk about discrimination to women in the fields of education, economy, politics, law, in Korea.

It seems a big topic, covering four aspects of society, but actually each one of them can be a research paper.

You can try to work on it first, and then based on the materials you can find, decide whether you will cover all, or just some of them.

Leslie