1. Introduction
"I Have a Dream" (Martin Luther KING, Jr.) That is the most important speech of American. Martin Luther KING, Jr. is the symbol of America freedom. From that speech, we can saw America society have change.
Body
1. What I think about the freedom of America. They can say anything they want that must under that speech can’t hurt anyone. America people have the right to talk, but they still need to follow some rule.
2. The freedom on internet. That also had some rule that American need to follow. if not, you will be charge.
3. From the house American own. I had rent a house out of campus. My landlord told me “That no one can’t allow to into the house without your permitted.” The right of your house.
4. America house, if you own the house, that house will forever belong to you. The price you own the right.(the fee)
Conclusion
If you want to have freedom, you also need to give up something.
Mar 13, 2010
Outline :See America through images(Man Chan)
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2 comments:
You have chosen the freedom and human rights in America as your theme.
That's good, but I think the supports you have chosen are weak.
You have to check what kinds of freedom and human rights which other countries except don't have.
Rihanna's song "Rude Boy" might not be a good support, because we do need some restriction in publication and production in mass media.
The right of ownership of property is one, but not a typical one.
Actually there might be better choices, such as the freedom of speech, esp. the year-long demonstration against president or government outside the White House.
Your conclusion says that you have to give up something for freedom. Do you mean every freedom comes through struggle, fight and sacrifice? Then give some explanation in Body part, you cannot get that conclusion if you didn't say anything in Body.
Leslie
ok,i saw that, i will change. thank you~
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