Outline (second)
Purpose: Visual-verbal
Audience: Instructor as well as class, members,
Thesis: Disney World is a very good place to take a break and relax.
1: Introduction
2: People aspire to happiness and well-being
A: Disney world let people release pressure
B: Disney world let people feel carefree and happy
3: Everyone hopes themselves become perfect. But we know nothing can be completely perfect.
A: Walt Disney said: "It's kind of fun to do the impossible."
4: American is a crowded country, especially in the city
A: Let them feel quiet and comfortable.
5: In conclusion and my opinion
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1 comment:
This topic doesn't seem like a topic for academic essay.
Look at your thesis statement, it's a fact, well-known and widely accepted. There is no need to explain further or prove it.
Think deeper to find out what you can write about this topic.
Right now I cannot think of any better idea about this topic.
Leslie
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