what do you think girls (Jake yoon)

In the class we were talking about why remale had to deserve worse than male.
It is quiet hard to say we, male treated female badly.

"it is our shared commitment toward a world in which the inborn potentialities of so many women's mind will no longer be wasted, raveled -away, paralyzed, or denied."
by Adrienne rich

I think it was a natural thing that female had to be deserved like second class? but definitely not now. the thing is that ages ago, males used to go out for hunting and females did houseworks. so the first important thing in life was hunting. so male was treated like first class.

however, now the situation is totally different than before. men have not to treat women like second class people. they can work, they are strong, they can be a president like the same things that men can do. they even better than men.

so my point is that this kind of situation that men treat women like second class, is processing of changing. because of the impact that we have been through from before.

Yunfei Cao---some puzzled

I want to talk about some puzzled from my writing.
The first thing, I don't know how to write it by American thought, I am not American, and also my basic education is not American. Facing things, I really don't know how American people think about it. So during my writing, almost time, I write it by my own thought which have been a habbit from my old education. How can I write it by American thought?
The second thing, many times, I found the work I have written is not like my thought before. I don't know why I can't write it like my thought.
The third thing, if I write my essay or modify my essay like what the book tought us, I will find I can't get enough page, because some wonderfu decorations are seen like insignificant. How to make my essay more wonderful?