The stereotyping of young people in Taiwan
Purpose: find some ways to get out of bad stereotyping
Audience: All
Tones: serious
Point of view: first person and second person
Thesis statement: two serious stereotyping are deeper affecting young people.
Structure:
1. Introduction: There are two negative stereotyping that always describe young people in Taiwan. Those are “the strawberry generation” and “Moonlight Clan”.
2. Body 1:
A. Explain “the strawberry generation”.
The shape of strawberry looks very beautiful and delicious but in contrast, it is very easy to get hurt. That is same kind of situation to young people. Their parents over protect their children and it cause they cannot withstand pressure.
3. The strawberry generation of Emotion.
One of the popular novel author in Taiwan, he publishes a novel, and it called “the strawberry with love”. In the article, he mentions that the strawberry generation not only happens on the job but also occurs in emotion.
B. Problem that strawberry generation will face in the future.
Some reports write that most of company would not like to interview people who born 1970s to 1980s, because they are weak to face the problems, their efficiency are slow and they lack motivated. Those kinds of reasons that make them too hard to find a job.
C. Change bad stereotyping
Not all of young people are like “strawberry generation, the news said that a girl replaces her father to run for a member of parliament. She decides to service community and change the image of the strawberry generation.
4. Body 2:
A. Explain “Moonlight Clan”
They do not usually earn very much and have not developed a habit of saving money, so all their money is used up at the end of each month. They unable to make earns meet, and they probably borrow money to their friends.
B. Not be “Moonlight Clan” method of five
5. Conclusion: Especially, more and more young people become to moonlight clan, and getting a card slave. And people turn to inability and sluggish, we should change this bad phenomenon.
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2 comments:
I don't see any connection between Body 1 and Body 2. Are they just separate groups of people, or are they somehow connected?
What's the purpose for you to introduce these two groups of people?
Do you mean there are stereotypes over these two groups of people, which should be removed? or do you mean these two groups should be aroused for change?
Make your research aim clear.
The subparts of the body are very confusing with those mixed use of numbers and letters.
The Conclusion part is only about "moonlight clan". Where does "the strawberry generation" go?
Leslie
“strawberry generation and “Moonlight Clan”, I think these two worlds can really described yong people. they don't know how to make money but use easyliy. it is a bad Phenomenon.---dan lu
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