Nov 13, 2009

outline (seong kyung kim)

Purpose: To discuss why people kill people and what background they have.

Audience: Anyone but mostly for the people who have children.

Thesis Statement: People kill people cause of mental disease and bad childhood. So that people who had bad background might go wrong way to prove what they had loathe of. Therefore we need to find a solution to stop them before all the people go undercontrol.

I.Introduction.
A.Why do people kill people?
II.People who grew up with bad background or childhood.
III.Other reasons
A.Racial discrimination
B.Hateness
C.
IV.Graph or table about how many people were killed in a year.
A.Explain for the graph or table

Conclusion

1 comment:

Leslie said...

This outline has not been completed yet.
If your hypothesis is people who have bad background or childhood are more possible to kill people. Then the data you should use to prove it are not only how many people were killed in a year, but also how many people were killed by people with bad background or childhood.

Part II should be the most important part in this paper and Part IV should be the support to it, too.

As for other reasons, they should be used as complementary, that is, mention but not focus on.

You have to find sufficient support to prove your hypothesis.

Leslie