Nov 11, 2009

Outline--Junjie Ruan

crash in least-developed countries, developing countries and developed countries

Outline

Purpose: Describe the crashes in least-developed countries, developing countries and developed countries.
Audience: everyone.
Tone: Narrative.
Point of view: Third person.
Thesis statement: Now we are living in a good environment, but there are still many people living in crashes.
Structure:

Ⅰ. Introduction:
1. The word crash started from a movie which names “crash”. This movie introduces arguments between people and people. It made me think about lives around us.

Ⅱ. Crashes in least-developed countries.
1. Many African countries are suffering famine. Men, women, and children have no food, even through animals are. They became unhealthy and emaciated. When we are thinking about what we want to eat tonight, they are still eating grass or dirt!
2. poor and the arts of medicine and surgery are somewhat in arrear in Africa, a little disease is turning into a deadly natural Enemy.

Ⅲ. Crashes in developing countries.
1. People don’t know how to protect themselves. It’s a big problem in developing countries.
2. Seven social problems hinder China.

Ⅳ. Crashes in developed countries.
1. Every country has its problem, even in the developed country. In US, UK and Australia I know that racism is normally treated to native and foreigners.

1 comment:

Leslie said...

What are the crashes in developing countries in Part III? They are not given clearly. Why don't people in developing countries know how to protect themselves? What are the seven social problems in China? Explain briefly.

Crashes in developed countries:
Besides racism, are you going to talk about disparity of the rich and the poor, too? What else?

You have to give either examples or statistics to support yourself for these crashes.

Leslie