Nov 11, 2009

outline YEN-CHIEH CHEN

International Security and weapon making
Thesis statement : International security is a big issue between countries. Security depends on weapons. Which country has most powerful weapon can decide other counties future. Therefore, international security is not only self-defense but aggression.
Purpose: research on international security. Why we need to make weapon. Why we fight each other. What is the benefit from war? Why we keep developing weapons and relationship between security, weapon, and war.
Audience: human
Tones: serious
STRUCTURE:
I. Introduction
International security rate depends on weapons. However, we use weapon is not only for protect from other country, but aggress others. Therefore, weapon can bring peace? A powerful country control the world may bring peace, but other counties may live in threat.
II. Body
A. Relation between security and weapon
I. Weapon make country stronger and powerful
II. High technological weapon can decrease dead of war
III. Country has most powerful weapon then has most security. No one dare to attack.
B. Weapon use in different way
I. Self-defense
II. Attack others
III. Selling for benefit
IV. Science

C. Benefit from war
I. Get the sources of energy and money, if you conquer other counties
II. Defuse threat from other counties.

2 comments:

Leslie said...

your topic is interesting:o)
yumiha

Leslie said...

In Body part, Part A explains the relations between security and weapon, which mean that weapon should be used to safeguard the security of a country.

However, in Part B, only the first use is self-defense, which is for security of its own country. The others are either to attach others, or selling weapon for benefit. As for science, I don't know what you mean. Maybe you want to talk about the two aggressive uses of weapons which threaten the international security.

Part C might be better to be titled as Threats of Weapons to international security. Then give more detailed explanation to the threats.

Then get to the conclusion that weapons bring more harm than peace to this world.

Leslie