Outline:
Topic: The coming of e-blog brings the conflicts between people
Aim: to understand why e-blog will isolate people’s “real” communication
Thesis statement: to know about these e-blogs, and why should we eliminate these new communication tools.
Body one: Nowadays, more and more people are addicted to online blog, like face book and msn spaces. People check these applications every couple minutes; they installed this into their Mobil phone, into their computers.
Body two: what can u do on these e-blogs.
The functions of these e-blogs
How to use them.
Body three: who are addict to them, why people so addict to them.
Body four: What kind pleasure these e-blog application and website bring to the young generation.
Body five: what kind problem these e-blogs bring to people.
Body six: true stories prove the troubles these e-blogs create
Body seven: how can we prevent these problems, is there anything we can do to eliminate this situation.
Body eight: conclusion.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Posts
1 comment:
The body is composed of 8 parts without the difference of levels.
Actually, it's better to reorganized by dividing them into the following three parts.
Part I: Introduction (the original Body One)
Part II: Reasons for people's addiction to e-blogs (Original Body Two, Three and Four)
A. Functions of e-blogs
B. How to use e-blogs
C. Reasons
1. pleasure
2. entertainment
3. ...
Part III: Problems people's addiction to e-blogs brings (Original Body five and six)
A. Problems and troubles
B. True stories
Part IV. Prevention to these problems (Original Body seven)
Part V. Conclusion (Original Body eight)
Think about the reorganization of your body day to make each topic stand out more obviously and developed intensively
Leslie
Post a Comment