Dec 12, 2011

when you raise your head

Jenny is a total lovely little girl with her head down and she is very inferior because she thinks she's nothing like other people, so she is always with his head down. One day, she went to the jewelry shop to buy a green bow, shopkeeper constantly praise her to wear a bow is beautiful, although Jenny don’t believe it, she is very happy, so she raised her head and eager to people see; when she went out and people ran into the shop, she was not take seriously. Then, Jenny entered the classroom, and met her teacher, "Jenny, you look so beautiful when you raise your head!” Teachers pat her shoulder and said that. On that day, she got a lot of praise. She would like to credit must be the bow, but when she looked at the mirror, there is no bow on her head, it must lost when she went out and touched with people in the shop. Confidence is a beautiful, while many people are too concerned about appearance and lose a lot of joy.

Nov 13, 2011

photos leave memory

When I was born, photography has been existed for a long time. But what is it? Photography is the art, science and practice of creating durable images by recording light or other electromagnetic radiation in Wikipedia’s definition. Photo is art that can leave the momentary feeling, can record your happiness and sadness. Every time when I saw the photos, they can recall me to think of at that time, friends and events. Keeping the moment of happiness and let the memory to think of the past experience. This is your integral part of enriching life. Photo is for the memory and in order to remember. Photo is a great thing, it’s no words, but has feelings. Occasionally, you will smile when you see photo’s innocent smiles. Childish innocence, young clinging, today's release, all the changes are in the ornament of picture frame, it has different period of self. You may look up the walls, says "ha! So then I was."

Oct 18, 2011

Test help us

As a student, we could not escape from the examination system; once you feel pressure, you may have power to study. After all the country's economy to develop, the key is to rely on talent, they must depend on education. So, good education means how to measure students’ achievements---tests become the necessary fact in life. “They protect us most of the time---from inept drivers, hazardous products, and shoddy professionals” (Ravitch806). If we eat the food that didn’t do the standards test, then all of us who did eat the no test food would have problem with our healthy. So, tests do protect us from tests’ own meaning. And tests help us for getting license, learning new things.

Minghong Wang

Sep 22, 2011

Hi, dear classmates
There’s something that I wanna share with you guys. Especially some students from other country.
In China, we believe that a good name may influence ones fate. My name is Minghong Wang. Wang is my family name, and this is a big family name in China ( like Smith, William, ). In Chinese, this word of Wang means king and power. Minghong is my first name. Actually, these are two words, Ming means tomorrow and Hong means rainbow in Chinese. So tomorrow's rainbow is my name's significance. I got this name from my grandmother, she wants me to never give up and always have hope. To my family, my name is full of joy. There is a rainbow, for my family and me. To my community, it means tomorrow's sunshine. It's a very positive name. I also feel my name suit me so much for my personality. Rainbow always show up after the rain. We must persist in our efforts, then we can see the rainbow. In addition to my name, I also have a nickname. My parents call me Xiao Honghong, the meaning of this is little baby. Finally, I want to talk about my English name, Joy. I choose it from my Chinese name's meaning. My family want me to bring joy for family.
If you are interested in this, you can leave your comments about any other special meaning of your name.
Minghong Wang

Sep 20, 2011

Some approaches to MLA work cited

Hi, everyone.
I know that MLA work cited is really painful if you are not used to it...
Also, I was struggling with citation for a long time. Throughout that painful times, I learned some shortcuts, which lessens your burdens for citation.

1) What you've found is part of academic journal or magazine, or even books. Futhermore, you can cite sources from newspapers such as NYTIMES in here...
Go to
http://proquest.umi.com/pqdweb?RQT=302&COPT=REJTPTEwMmEmSU5UPTAmVkVSPTI=&clientId=18091&cfc=1

And type either title of the journal or author of the journal. If you want to search author of the journal, you have to change "citation and abstract" into the "author"

Then, after you type, you will see the "cite this" in the far below of the website.
The computer program will make a right citation form for you.

2) If you're resources are from website, then you should go to
http://www2.liu.edu/cwis/cwp/library/workshop/citmla.htm

This website will help you to write down MLA citation in a right form...

Sep 15, 2011

Racial Profiling and Vigilantism

Vigilantism consists of self-appointed citizens taking the law into their own hands by "arresting," convicting, and punishing an accused person.

Racial profiling is the use of a person's race or ethnicity by law enforcement or security officials as a factor in deciding whether to investigate that person or engage in enforcement (search someone at an airport security checkpoint, make a traffic stop or arrest, etc).

By defintion, racial profiling is a form of racism; not so with vigilantism. Vigilantes typically attempt to conceal their identity, hence the masks and robes used by the Ku Klux Klan.

Sep 14, 2011

Resources that might be helpful...

Hi, everyone... As we all know, this essay is about our perspective on this topic: "“Racial profiling: Should Airports Use it to Screen Passengers?”

To get some insight about this topic, the essay “Racial profiling: Should Airports Use it to Screen Passengers?” helps you to shape the perspective.

I am writing down notes in the class which will benefit our essay.

1)Racial Profiling is sometimes acceptable because
- Terrorists are mostly from Middle East countries.
- Overlook("prevent terrorists from boarding an airliner can cost thousands of lives")
- Waste time(which means,"focus our attention on people who fit the "profile" of those most likely to attempt another September 11".

2) Racial Profiling is sometimes not acceptable because
-"With the better equipment and training for security personnel"
-Vigintalism(a person who tries in an unofficial way to prevent crime, or to catch and punish someone who has committed a crime)- I still do not understand this part...
-Profiling does not make a measurable difference in the preventention of crime

Welcome to exchange ideas freely here!

Hi, guys,
Feel free to post freely here.
Once you accept my invitation, you will be able to post. When you are going to post, you have to sign in with your email address and password. Then on the page appeared, click "New Post", then you will see an editable window. After keying in your words, make sure you click "Publish Post".
It's just so easy.
Enjoy!!!

May 5, 2010

Last Day (Jee Yun Choi)

Hi~ everyone! How's your test going?
I think some of you already finish yout final.
I am just done all of my final exam.
I am going to meet Professor, Bai to hand in my portfolio to date.
It is my last work for this semester and it means everything is almost done.

As I posted before, this semester is really going fast.
Time flies .....
I regret some of my work. On the other hand, I satisfy the other one.
However, I am fine because I tried to do for everything.

we can still make a great job for this semester.
I believe that most friends can do that.
Let's do our best until last day of this semester.

Now I have to go to meet Professor.
She is waiting for us^^
I might meet some of you at that place.

Have a great summer break and hopefully receive good grades!


Bye,

Jee Yun Choi


P.S. I also appreciate to the Professor, Bai about teaching for us in this semester.
She always made a smile for us. I will miss that! ^^

May 3, 2010

Final week (Yilei Zhou)

Hi everyone, this week is important right? final exam is coming one by one.

we can handle it guys. Dont's nervous, as cool as usual.

Read question slowly and carefully.

Good luck for everyone. Hope everybody get A+++

Have a good summer.

Eng 2F (002) Class Photo

Hi, Guys,

Thank you for your efforts in this semester. Hope all you guys will keep in touch with each other and make your college life a wonderful one.

Here are our class photos, and you will find them on our class websites, too, along with contact information.






Eng1F (003) Class Photos

Hi, Guys,
Thank you for your efforts in this semester. Hope all you guys will keep in touch with each other and make your college life a wonderful one.

Here are our class photos, and you will find them on our class websites, too, along with contact information.





What's writing? (Yilei.zhou)

What's writing? just writing something use pen in English? or just type it? what ever, i dont like it. Because, it diffcult for us, English is not our first tone. So why do I need write it in English. Whatever I hate it. I like speaking much more than writing. But, in here, we need it, whatever acdamic use or teacher's rules, we must use it. By the way, we need consider spelling, grammar, even acdamic word. it's too diffcult for us. in this semester i did 4 essays, but the highest grade is B+, it means not bad, but I dont thing so, if i change to speaking, the grade will be higher.

English is a long story, the first time I heard English was in middle school, because we dont have English class in primary school. so count the year, i have already learn English for more than 10 years. why my English still so poor. Because I didnt work hard.

I have been here for 2 years, I thing my English skill have already move to higer step. but I still hate writing. the reason i hate it, because i dont use it in daily life, are you writing something to someone for communication? no we speaking.

this is writing, i hate it.

Eng 1F (002) Class Photos

Hi, Guys,

Thank you for your efforts in this semester. Hope all you guys will keep in touch with each other and make your college life a wonderful one.

Here are our class photos, and you will find them on our class websites, too, along with contact information.






I hate writing, but I'm not afraid of it (Phuong Nguyen)

Writing is a really tough work. I have been always hated and afraid of writing since I know how to write. I have begun writing in English since I was in my first year in high school. However, it was not until the last year in high school when preparing for my TOEFL test that I took it serious. Until now, I have had two years of experience writing in English. From those experiences, I have got my own definition for writing.

First of all, writing is a good manner to express yourself. Through writing, you can express your ideas, opinions on a specific topic. Writing is especially useful when you are not very good at speaking or you don't have enough time to express yourself to others. In academic fields, writing is considered the main channel that you can use to express yourself to your professors, through emails, projects... When making a project, you cannot just talk about it, you need to make a plan and write everything down. In addition, writing often takes time, so you can look over everything more carefully than when speaking. Hence, you can express yourself more exactly and more efficiently.

Second, writing is a way to gain knowledge from the world. Writing requires more than skills; you need knowledge of different fields in life. Depending on topics of your writing, required knowledge and experiences vary. They can be about science, literature, law, society or more specific such as women’s right, racial differentiation… To write a good essay or paper, you need to have a lot of knowledge in the field, which can be attained through research. During your writing process, you need to think about your topic a lot. Therefore, you may realize many things that you cannot when just reading and researching. Then, you may want to do more researches and learn more. That’s how writing helps you gain knowledge.

Finally, writing helps you know a language better. Everybody meets more or less difficulties writing in a language other than their mother tongue. Therefore, you need to look words up in a dictionary. Sometimes, when I wanted to translate my idea from Vietnamese into English, some words and phrases just came up to my mind. They expressed my ideas exclusively and I have no idea that I have ever known about them. I think that they are what I got from reading stories, articles or watching movies before. But then I don’t have chance to speak them out so I don’t know that they exist in my head. When I write, they pop out, letting me know that I know them.

Once again, I still hate writing, especially when the topic is not what I’m fond of. But I’m not afraid of it anymore. It is because writing is based on skills and knowledge, which I believe that I can do well. Writing, now, seems much easier for me.

May 2, 2010

what is writing? (yuting huang)

What is writing?

What is writing? In my opinion, writing is write down, what you are think and what you are interesting about, in the eng2f and eng1f class, we always write the paper follow the topic, I found the U.S. professors like torture of students use papers, and the professor from Chinese, like torture students use exam. In my way, I still feel a little examination would be easy. Because the test can be cheating. However, the paper can not. Every time English teacher arranged a writing assignment, I would wonder, why we shouled use English to write this article. If I can write this assignment in chinese, then more wonderful than use english. Written in Chinese, I feel I can write very well, but in English I wrote bad. Because many words, I know how to express in Chinese. But in English I do not know how to said it. For example, I always like writing in reference to an old peopel saying in the words, verse and phrase, these words should be translated into English is very difficult. I can only give these in the article cited. Then someone said, we can use the famous foreigners say in their article, this for me is difficult, too. Because the English book I know noly a little. So do not say that references may have heard of hearing. And I also know that we are studying in the USA, not in China. So writing in the United States is very important. Some professors's final examination may be is a essay. To be honest, I really do not like writing, even my dance courses this semester requires writing. I'm almost crazy. I really do not know the relationship between dance and writing. However, I heard about that the mathematics major does not require student writing, I am thinking about to transfer to mathematics major? I thing, maybe this major more easy for me graduation!

What is writing? (Jee Yun Choi)

Writing is one of lots of ways to express what I want to say. I think it is not only different style from conversation but also sometimes more meaningful way to announce our feeling to people. The reason is that we can think more than saying through brainstorming and outline. Additionally, sometimes writing is more effective to express out intention. We recognized that thorough trying some kind of essay: persuasive essay, descriptive essay. Writing can acquire more information and credit than saying.
As everyone knows, we all are international students in ENG 2F class. Each person should be good at writing in their first language. However, it is certain that we usually get in trouble because of English as second language for us. That is why there are English composition class for us. Through Eng 2F class in this semester, I learn some helpful things for my college life.
The English 2f course of Prof. Leslie Bai was not too easy, but pretty salutary for me in that I could learn about exact MLA style for college essay, and practice writing enough with Bai’s good advices. Actually, we have been required various things for homework and it was really helpful to improve my reading and writing skills. It is true that I felt annoying to read books and to write journals at the every time, but now I appreciate about that to Professor Bai due to my writing skill improved. She was always kind to answer my questions. Of course, I am pretty sure that she was little bit strict to evaluate the essay, but thanks to this, I could concentrate more on my essay. I also got interests about writing more. It became kind of motivation for me in English class.
My strengths as a writer are that I can always create novel ideas for the essay and I have strong views as well. That’s why my essay is different to other’s one, so it was used to be evaluated well in this point. I also can analyze the detail of text well with various evidences. Actually, my essay was not specific at the first time, but I become changed after Bai’s advice in my essay. The weaknesses of my essay are always grammar errors. I believed my grammar is kind of great before, but I usually got a penalty in this part. I become improved about my grammar in this semester, but I need more to study in American university.
The “research paper” was very impressed for me in this course. It was hardest one, but I learn many things. I have written various writing so far, but it is totally different form from the other one. Actually, I tried research paper of Sociology class last semester for the first time. Fortunately, I received pretty good grade although I did not learn enough about this kind of essay. However, it was very difficult and I spent a lot of time to figure out why I was writing that since I did not have any background knowledge for that. Therefore, learning about research paper in this semester was really helpful for me. We spent ample time to think about a topic and to search source for our essay. It was hard time for us, but I improved my writing skills and learned about one of writing style for college essay. It was also great time to find my weakness for essay out. I am not sure about my grade for this, but I satisfied about my effort. I had a good time with my class mates and Professor Bai in this semester. The semester is going to end. I will do my best until last day of this semester.

What is Writing ? (Anthimos Michael)

Writing is a way to communicate with each other. When you write, you put your ideas together more carefully than speaking. Because when you speak the ideas in your head is sometimes scrabbled and confusing to express. In contrast when you write, you can focus on what you are trying to say and provide a better answer to the question that you are asked. For me I find writing to be the best way to express my feelings and ideas. From high school when I started to write some small English essays and now in college where I write bigger essays; I found that, the difficulty level change was immerse. I was shocked when I got my first ENG 1F essay corrected, and saw that I had many problems with punctuation and structure. Things that in high school were never corrected by my teachers and therefore I didn’t learn them. I felt a kind of anger for my high school teachers of not correcting my mistakes. I tried to improve my writing to a more academic level. I know I have improved my skills but I know I still have a long way to go.

Through the courses that I take, sometimes when a Professor asks a question and I might know the answer, I don’t answer the question because am afraid of spelling mistakes. However when the question is asked on a paper, I find it easier to answer the question through writing. Writing makes me feel confident about myself. Sometimes international students have to translate English to their first language and vice versa. This makes them look as slow minded and therefore be misjudged. But through writing you can prove them wrong.

Writing is very efficient way to communicate. A very popular quote said by Edward Bulwer underlines the significance of writing. “The pen is mightier than the sword.” The quote meaning is that written material is sometimes more influential than fighting.

Writing is the way to express your opinions about every subject. It’s also a more formal way to communicate with each other if written correctly. For instance, a telephone call to my Professor would be less informal than writing a good e-mail. Also I can’t remember how many times I had to express my feelings through writing as if some things are meant to be expressed through writing.

Sometimes reading other people writings is an awesome experience. Trying to find out how they think and what they mean on every word, it’s a thrill! Because sometimes one word can mean so many things.

I hope that I will continue to write next semester, so I can improve more my writing skills. Writing for me is the way to show other people how I think. Through my experience through ENG1F and ENG2F I developed the necessary skills to write better essays for future projects. Skills like researching databases, citation and not to plagiarize are only some of them. Hopefully i will increase my skills, and provide better essays in the future. Also writing is my way to prove to professors my true strengths about the courses.