Title: American women rights: is there is no women rights in American political and do women have enough ability to governance the Unit Sates?
Outline
Thesis: the American government should let women have more women rights, especially in political, Really Achieving Male and female co-governance in this country.
i. American is one of the most freedom countries in the world, but still need give women more trust and opportunities in political part.
A. The 300 years of American history is always contorted by the man, man own this county, they are the pillar, women although have lots of rights, but they don’t really power in political of this country.
B. Experts women who stranded a very important position in the history of American political.
C. Experts the present situation of women in the political.
ii. Finding what does bind up the women?
A. Experts the How is the situation of women’s job, the labor Statistics
B. Experts American young women’s development-oriented (what do they want to do in the future?).
C. Experts The traditional concept of women.
D. People’s concept, they like Male and female co-governance in this country or male mange this country or female
iii. Finding the present situation Female Politicians now
A. Experts aim and think of female politicians
B. Experts when they walk on the political (how old are they that start to their political career).
C. The situation Of Some successful female politicians in America, and how they are.
iv. Approach the thesis is right or wrong.
v. If right, how to change this.
A. Form the law of Politian( some law not good for female politicians)
B. Change people’s transitional concept
C. Approach women have enough ability to manage this country as well as men did.
1. Education
2. capacity for action
3. Example of successful female politician in the other countries.
i. Summary
American women have enough ability to share this country’s power with men.
Mar 20, 2010
Mar 16, 2010
Women's right: abuse women in human's history (yuting huang)
I always interesting about the abuse women in the human history. For example, the Foot binding in china, and at the Middle Ages the women wear the fitness wear and so on. I think this is a kind of abuse women. but in fact I want to know, how the women think about these things. Are they identify with this, or they hate this? In my paper. I will stress the foot binding about china women and the women wear the fitness wear in the middle ages, because my great-grandmother have this kind feet. and when i was young I heard a lot of things about Foot binding, and in my opinion the fitness wear is really bad for human's body. so, I will research this in my paper.
Mar 15, 2010
See America through Images (Xu Hang)
See America through Images
Barbie: From the Doll to the American symbol
Outline
Title: Barbie: From the Doll to the American symbol
Purpose: To introduce
Audience: Professor Bai and classmates in English 1F.
Tone: Academic and serious
Point of view: First person
Thesis: As the one of American symbol, Barbie dolls not only on behalf of the woman’s rights, but also becoming a dream to encourage people to pursue them perfect. Through the Barbie doll, see the American women how to fight for their right.
Body:
1. Introduce the. phylogeny of the Barbie doll.
2. The argument in the process of development of Barbie, and lead out the woman’s rights in America.
3. The history of woman’s rights in America.
4. Conclusion, and summarize the Barbie’s spirit and why the little doll can be the America symbol.
The first blog of research paper(Haiou Chu)
With the progress of human civilization, the statuses of women in society are higher and higher. In the modern society, a woman can do almost things which man is capable to do. In my research paper, I want to talk about why women can get their rights what are women cannot get in the past. I want to compare the women between past and now. From the situation of family, education, career, society and other aspects can evidence that women get more rights. I would like to focus on discuss women's rights in Asia, because a few years ago, the position of women in many countries of Asia is very low. Even now, many women have to be housewives after they are married. I want to through the research paper, people can pay more attention that let Asian women get more equal situation.
PS: I forgot post this yesterday.
PS: I forgot post this yesterday.
Topic for the 3rd essay (Phuong Nguyen)
I. Introduction
Women’s rights at workplace: wage gaps, racial discrimination, sexual issues, inequity of marriage and parenthood, working hours…
II. Body
1. Present situations
a. There is a big wage gaps between men and women.
b. Women in color skin are discriminated and treated unfairly.
c. Women are treated differently regarding of their marriage status and age.
d. Women are the victims of sexual abuse at workplace.
e. A portion of women who have high-qualified education choose to opt out of the labor force to take care of their family.
2. Reasons
a. The most important reason: women’s perceptions about their rights. They are affected by old-fashioned conceptions, which are hardly to change. Men keep the same ideas so they will not allow their wife to do whatever she wants to.
b. Women’s instinct makes them feel responsible of their children and families. Therefore, for most of them, career is not the first priority.
3. Solutions:
a. There is a need of changing people’s minds about women’s rights.
b. Women need to understand their value appropriately.
III. Conclusion
Although there are a lot of advance in the issue, people need to do more and more to attain the equity at workplace.
Mar 14, 2010
"The Achievement of Desire" (WooHyun Kim)
Richard Rodriguez's article talks about the alienation from his family his education brought him. He describes how in his childhood he was a 'scholarship student', a term to describe children who come from working class backgrounds but excel in the classroom. These children tend to have to live two lives, one at home where they start to grow apart from their parents as they surpass them intellectually, and one at school where they cling to the teacher for encouragement and guidance. The family divide that forms serves as a motivation to succeed, but also an emotional pain that carries on to college and beyond.
Had a great time with my friends!
Yesterday night, I went to the nice Asian restaurant with two American girls and one Asian boy for celerbrating my birthday. Actually, my birthday is march 15th. But unfortunatelly, I have three tests at next week, so we decided to go there at saturday. One of my friend who is Kristine Kook drove to us to get there and it was the first time to visit there to me. That resturant was kind of Asian fusion style one. So we could taste a lot of kinds food. Chinese, Japanese, and Korean food too. Suprisingly, two of my american friends enjoyed Asian food a lot. I was so glad about that, and I also enjoyed a lot and all of foods were so mad tastey!!
If time allows, I want to take you guys to this Asian resturant. Unfortunatelly, I forgot this resturant's name! Monday is comming, hopely this week will be meaningful to you guys!
"Reality TV : Supprising Throwback To The Past" (WooHyun Kim)
This article tells about how the American media can sell marriage and love. They are using money to bribe people into making huge decisions in a pressure situation, and the viewers love it. This results in the belittlement of the marriage system and lessens the value of getting married in the first place. If a person is getting married to a complete stranger based on first impressions, or even at the hands of whoever may be watching, the only value in the marriage itself is to get on tv. People these days value fame and fortune over love. The way these reality tv shows force people into poor decisions made on a whim is dumbing down society and turning something so important into a tool for entertainment. The thought that there are women that need a game show audience to choose their husband is appalling. And they wonder why Americas divorce rate is up.
Women's right: history, situation, advancement, and future direction. (Jee Yun Choi)
Thesis: Even though numerous movement for women's right and women's advancement in society, there still exist discrimination against women. We should remember women's sufferage and effort for the womens' right.
There was a movie about women's right called Iron Jawed Angels. As we saw the movie, there were women's suffrage movement during the 1910's.
I think it is hard for most to remember that women have had the right to vote for less than 100 years. However, there still exist numerous issues about discrimination against women.
- Votes for women: One hundred years toward suffarage.
- Women's rights movement in the U.S. This timeline covers the years of 1848 to 1920.
- Feminist protest, Miss America and "bra burning"
3. various women leader in the world.
Politicial part
Hilary Clinton - Presidential candidate as an women
Women's right are human's right speech.
but there are still less people ( only 3 governors of state in the U.S.)
Economic part
Myung Hee Lee - currently the chair man of the Shinsegae group, the largest retail group in Korea.
but most chair men of the company are the male.
4. Conclusion
The social system still discriminateagainet the women.
It is easy to forget remembering the effort fot women's right.
We have to remember women's sufferage and we have to encourage the women' right in the society.
There was a movie about women's right called Iron Jawed Angels. As we saw the movie, there were women's suffrage movement during the 1910's.
I think it is hard for most to remember that women have had the right to vote for less than 100 years. However, there still exist numerous issues about discrimination against women.
1. The social situation about women discrimination in the world.
- Women discrimination at work.
- Women's rights are an issue in countries where religion is law, such as many Muslim countries.
2. History of movements about disctiminate against women in the world.
- Votes for women: One hundred years toward suffarage.
- Women's rights movement in the U.S. This timeline covers the years of 1848 to 1920.
- Feminist protest, Miss America and "bra burning"
3. various women leader in the world.
Politicial part
Hilary Clinton - Presidential candidate as an women
Women's right are human's right speech.
but there are still less people ( only 3 governors of state in the U.S.)
Economic part
Myung Hee Lee - currently the chair man of the Shinsegae group, the largest retail group in Korea.
but most chair men of the company are the male.
4. Conclusion
The social system still discriminateagainet the women.
It is easy to forget remembering the effort fot women's right.
We have to remember women's sufferage and we have to encourage the women' right in the society.
"Under the Sign of Mickey Mouse" (WooHyun Kim)
After reading this article, I made this.
Globalization is Not Americanization
There are two points of view about globalization in terms of culture. Pro-globalizers believe that the age of cultural pluralism has come true as various cultures over the world are freely exchanged beyond national borders. Conversely, cultural pessimists charge that globalization has been imposing Americanized uniformity, which may undermine local cultures and national identities. Each argument has some truth in it, but here I'd like to explore some over-blown fears about Americanization.
First, you can choose to drink Coke and eat at McDonald's without becoming American. One newspaper photo of Taliban fighters in Afghanistan showed them toting Kalashnikovs as well as a sports bag with Nike's trademark. People's culture may scarcely be eroded by mere commercial artifacts.
Second, America transforms foreign cultures into a friendly and commercial culture. Some say that American mass culture has transformed the world into a replica of the United States. Yet the reason for the success of the movie 'Titanic' was not because it celebrated American values but because people all over the world could see some part of their own lives in the story of love and loss. Successful American culture is attributed, to a large extent, to America's dependence on foreign cultures.
Third, Americas culture may not be all that American. American audience is international because of the influx of immigrants and refugees. Its regional, ethnic, religious, and racial diversity have forced America to develop cultural products with a broad multi-cultural appeal. The Hollywood studios and television networks, for instance, have had to learn how to speak to a variety of groups and classes at home. That has given them the techniques to appeal to an equally diverse audience abroad. American culture, in essence, is mixed-up cultures of the world
Fourth, national identity is not disappearing but the bonds of nationality are loosening. Nationality doesn't make an absolute difference in establishing your identity any more. Being Korean or American does not define who you are: It is part of who you are. To loosen nationality is one thing, and to lose national identity is another. As long as you speak Korean, were born and live near each other, face similar problems, and have a common experience, you are still Korean. Your national identity will not disappear.
Based on the above-mentioned exaggerations behind Americanization, it is hard to assert that globalization comes down to Americanization. It is true that American culture goes global, but it doesn't mean to regard global culture and American culture as synonymous.
Globalization is Not Americanization
There are two points of view about globalization in terms of culture. Pro-globalizers believe that the age of cultural pluralism has come true as various cultures over the world are freely exchanged beyond national borders. Conversely, cultural pessimists charge that globalization has been imposing Americanized uniformity, which may undermine local cultures and national identities. Each argument has some truth in it, but here I'd like to explore some over-blown fears about Americanization.
First, you can choose to drink Coke and eat at McDonald's without becoming American. One newspaper photo of Taliban fighters in Afghanistan showed them toting Kalashnikovs as well as a sports bag with Nike's trademark. People's culture may scarcely be eroded by mere commercial artifacts.
Second, America transforms foreign cultures into a friendly and commercial culture. Some say that American mass culture has transformed the world into a replica of the United States. Yet the reason for the success of the movie 'Titanic' was not because it celebrated American values but because people all over the world could see some part of their own lives in the story of love and loss. Successful American culture is attributed, to a large extent, to America's dependence on foreign cultures.
Third, Americas culture may not be all that American. American audience is international because of the influx of immigrants and refugees. Its regional, ethnic, religious, and racial diversity have forced America to develop cultural products with a broad multi-cultural appeal. The Hollywood studios and television networks, for instance, have had to learn how to speak to a variety of groups and classes at home. That has given them the techniques to appeal to an equally diverse audience abroad. American culture, in essence, is mixed-up cultures of the world
Fourth, national identity is not disappearing but the bonds of nationality are loosening. Nationality doesn't make an absolute difference in establishing your identity any more. Being Korean or American does not define who you are: It is part of who you are. To loosen nationality is one thing, and to lose national identity is another. As long as you speak Korean, were born and live near each other, face similar problems, and have a common experience, you are still Korean. Your national identity will not disappear.
Based on the above-mentioned exaggerations behind Americanization, it is hard to assert that globalization comes down to Americanization. It is true that American culture goes global, but it doesn't mean to regard global culture and American culture as synonymous.
wemen's right (Yilei Zhou)
Wemen's right is a big peoblem in this world. Because in many parts or positions, wemen and men are unfair. in the political, social, and many parts cant be fair. this is why wemen's right comes from.
In my rearch paper, I will talk about the the reason why wemen cant get their right. and informating, background. This problem in many parts: education problem, wemen's work,
payment, family problem and so on.
In the U.S.A may be better, because this is a freedom country, everybody will get fair thing.
But in the developing countries or third countries may not.
In my rearch paper, I will talk about the the reason why wemen cant get their right. and informating, background. This problem in many parts: education problem, wemen's work,
payment, family problem and so on.
In the U.S.A may be better, because this is a freedom country, everybody will get fair thing.
But in the developing countries or third countries may not.
wealth gap U.S(yang.xu)
purpose:dicoveer the wealth gap in U.S
audience:every age
tone:serious
point of view:there is such big distance between poor and rich. there is no absoluteness fair in the world.
introduction:1.how the richer's life 2.how the poor's life 3.compare with them 4.the reason of the this result 5.how to solve the problem
conclusion: the american life will be better if the goverment do what they should do
audience:every age
tone:serious
point of view:there is such big distance between poor and rich. there is no absoluteness fair in the world.
introduction:1.how the richer's life 2.how the poor's life 3.compare with them 4.the reason of the this result 5.how to solve the problem
conclusion: the american life will be better if the goverment do what they should do
Empire state of my mind
Outline
Purpose: To introduce
Audience: All readers
Tone: Straightforward
Point of view: First person
Thesis: Empire state is self-evidence. You might feel it everywhere at anytime. Show up everything through images and let images tell you something about empire state.
Body:
1. Introduce a little bit about NYC. Moreover, describe first image that relate to NYC.
2. Analysis rest of images and explain claims and evidences.
3. Comparison and contrast
4. Combine and make a result
Conclusion.
American gun (Yang Li)
Outline
Purpose: to inform
Audience: everyone
Tone: serious
Point of view: first person
Thesis: The guns in America are pretty popular. The majority Americans believe that they have a right to own a gun. Although several shooting incident happened in American school, the gun law could not avoid the tragedy. In my opinion, it's not a good situation that the gun becoming popular. (the reasons are...)
Introduction: In America, the majority Americans believe that they have right to own a gun. Also, lots of people demand that the US Congress enact a strict gun control law.
Body
1. In the picture, the two family members hold the two guns. The cute boy stands beside his parents.
2. The gun has lots of function, such as, hunting, protect own in emergency or in the war.
3. The reason why Lots of Americans buy the gun.
a. to protect themselves. The reason is some of them don’t trust the government. They don't feel safe when everyone has gun except themselves.
b. Some of them are collector or shooter who loves the firearms.
I don't think it's the good situation that everyone has the weapon to protect themselves. (the reasons are ...)
4. The reason why they don’t trust government. Several shooting incident happened in the school. The tragedy cast a cloud over person’s soul.
5. Also, many citizens demand that the US Congress enact a strict gun control law.
Conclusion
The shooting incident hit American people a lot. It causes American psychological problems. The best solution is to build a strict gun law.
America Dream(Chen Zhao)
Out Line
Audience: Professor and classmates
Thesis: Every American has their own America Dream, they belief that as long as the United States after a hard struggle
will be able to achieve the ideal of a better life.
Intorduce: intorduce what is the America dream, and the connotation of the American Dream.
Body: talk about how the American dream influence and guide the development of the United States and American people.
conclusion: talk about how the American dream changes right now.
the achievement of desire (YU CHEN)
Education is good for any individuals, as a common sense. However, are there all good aspects? Maybe things won’t be that simple. In the article, the main idea is that education sometimes can alienate people from their classmates, families, even their origins. There are so many evidences to illustrate that the writer has been changed gradually though education that on contrary made him went away from his own family members. For example, the writer’s parents are from the place where the people speak Spanish, but after receiving education from the good English teacher, the young writer started to correct his parents’ accent and allow him to look the accent as humiliating. Those kinds of cases illustrate the writer’s point that sometimes education will let people lose the respect to parents.
In my own view, I have some deep feelings about the last part of the whole article. As a Chinese student who goes to America to look for higher education, parents must be very worried and curious about my life. They always keep asking me how is school going, but what can I say to them? I do not know how I can reply the question, because sometimes we just lose the same topic with our parents. Of course education is not the only cause to make you alienate from your family, but it do is a primary cause. Furthermore, I agree that some of the writer’s opinions are too extreme, education will teach us lots of new knowledge, but at the same time, we cannot use this reason to alienate our family, our origins. “scholarship boy” is not so good, acceptable or popular in public.Route 66 (Mengmeng zhang)
Purpose: see the history of mother road route 66.
Audience: Professor and classmates
Thesis: route 66 is the mother road of America. Route 66 is not only about concrete and tarmac; it’s about people’s hopes and dreams. It is a very important part of America history.
Tone: serious
Point of view: a student who do the research of route 66
1. Introduction of route 66
2. Why the route 66 is so important in America history
a. wave of immigration
b. hard times
3. Route 66 become a kind of culture and sign
a. Books
b. Movies
c. Music
4. Plan to travel route 66
5. Conclusion
Audience: Professor and classmates
Thesis: route 66 is the mother road of America. Route 66 is not only about concrete and tarmac; it’s about people’s hopes and dreams. It is a very important part of America history.
Tone: serious
Point of view: a student who do the research of route 66
1. Introduction of route 66
2. Why the route 66 is so important in America history
a. wave of immigration
b. hard times
3. Route 66 become a kind of culture and sign
a. Books
b. Movies
c. Music
4. Plan to travel route 66
5. Conclusion
see America though images ( JIn Huang)
Outline
#1: Introduction : though the first black people walk in the white house, does America have
some different changes?
#2: Body part: use some question to discuss with.
1. War problem
2. Economic
3. the connect with other countries
#3: Conclusion: overall, see the America in my eyes though images
See America through Images (Xu Hang)
Eng1F
Dr.Leslie Bai
Xu Hang
March.14.2010
See America through Images
The freedom of America
Outline
Title: The freedom of America
Purpose: Through the picture look into the freedom American.
Audience: Professor Bai and classmates in English 1F.
Tone: Academic and serious.
Point of view: Americans emphasize human rights and freedom. Through the statue of Liberty, see freedom in America.
Thesis: America is a country which is advocates the freedom and struggle, through the images, retrospect the reason and introduce the freedom and human rights in America at present.
Introduction: The Statue of Liberty is symbol of America and she is symbolizes the American people to seek after the ideal of freedom. Through the image of Statue of Liberty, introduce the history factor and the action embody the freedom by Americans, let more people understand the freedom land.
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