Here, I put the brief outline of my research paper.
1. Title: Violence in current schools
2. Purpose: To inform the psychology of victims
3. Audience: Whole students as well as teachers, parents
4. Tone: Straightforward and serious
5. Point of View: Third person (as one of the victims)
6. Thesis: Education to make a thoughtful person today should be considered seriously.
7. Pattern of development: Illustration with examples and experiences
8. Organizational approach: Largely three parts (Introduction, Body, Conclusion)
- Introduction : Purpose of the research and introduction that I want to tell readers.
- Body: Main explanation with examples and experiences that I suffered.
- Conclusion: My solution and opinion of school violence.
Your outline conveys little information about what you are going to do in this paper.
ReplyDeleteYou'd better give much more details about your body part. Otherwise, I am unable to give any feedback.
Leslie